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I want to escape from real world.
This is too much for me.
My heart is broken.
The jokes are no funny any more.

Love is not for me.
It is not the happy fairytale
I think it would be.

Love is a cruel game,
and just the lucky ones will win.
I am just an invisible tiny girl
In a big and scary world.


Now I am alone,
Crying for a guy that never loved me
For a estupid boy who made me laugh,
Who made me love him,
Who destroyed  my world, my smile.

Love is not for me.
Hope you like it, it is a new poem I wrote today, when I was ill :( :heart:
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:icongudrun355:
GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012
beautiful and sad.
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:iconiamluli:
iamluli Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012
Thank you :) Yes, it is sad
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:icongudrun355:
GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012
But good. You're very welcome!
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:iconiamluli:
iamluli Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012
Thankss! I really appreciate your opinion :D
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:icongudrun355:
GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012
No problem. I enjoyed your poem.
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:iconiamluli:
iamluli Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012
:D :D :D Thank you :heart:
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:icongudrun355:
GUDRUN355 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012
:) You're very welcome!
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:iconelicandy:
elicandy Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012
awww :aww: me encantaaaa <3 <3 no quiero ser un put-down, pero es made ;) igual lo ameee, esta re demassss, te juro, te entiendoo :saddummy: para... esto esta basado en sentimientos REALES??? you better explain this. pero como sea, me encantooo :D :heart:
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:iconiamluli:
iamluli Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012
made?? que signifiica made? es original che! jajja graciaas :D :D
bueno masomenos, hoy te explico :)
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:iconelicandy:
elicandy Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012
jaja ya te expliquee :D
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:iconiamluli:
iamluli Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012
lose, jjaja gracias que idiota que fui :(
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:iconelicandy:
elicandy Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012
nah, we all make mistakes, darling ;)
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:iconiamluli:
iamluli Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012
i know know, pero esoo? dios la profe de inges me mata ajajaj
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:iconelicandy:
elicandy Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012
jajaja
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:iconsquibblyquill:
squibblyquill Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012
I like the idea, it speaks to my life somehow
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:iconiamluli:
iamluli Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012
Haha thanks a lot :D
I think that many women (or men) will find it somehow related to their lives, again, thank you :)
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:iconsquibblyquill:
squibblyquill Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012
yeah pretty true that
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:iconiamluli:
iamluli Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012
:D :D :D thank you for the fav
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:iconsquibblyquill:
squibblyquill Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012
most welcome! :D
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