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Don't you remember?
All the sweet things,
The smiles, the laughs,
The kisses, the hugs.

The moments we spent
Together,
Happy, like a couple.

We were happy,
Don't you remember?
Maybe we weren't perfect,
But I loved you.

Don't you remember when,
You told me, "we were made,
for each other"
And the next day, you went
Far, far away?

I have waited you,
For a long long time,
Maybe I have waited for you,
For too much time.

You broke all the promises,
Hide my smile, my heart,
Don't you remember when,
You told me you will never,
EVER hurt me?

Don't come back.
Time's up darling.
You broke my heart,
I will break yours now.
If you break my heart, I will break your face.
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:iconluna132:
me encantaaaa
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:iconiamluli:
Graciaaaas, me alegro :heart:
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GUDRUN355 Apr 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I absolutely love it. Well written and full of real feeling. Well done.
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:iconiamluli:
Thank you so much :heart: I really appreciate your opinion. :D
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:icongudrun355:
GUDRUN355 Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You are a good poetess. You're very welcome!
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:iconiamluli:
Thank youu, you are a good poetess too!
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:icongudrun355:
GUDRUN355 Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you and you're welcome.
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